Thursday, 5 July 2018
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ReplyDeleteKia ora, I am Jack from Makauri School.
I really liked how you put some cool words in your writing.
I learnt that your good at gaming and you like hunting.
Maybe you could take off the boring parts off the start and hook the reader in with a good idea.
Mā te wā
Jack
Quentin i like your story
ReplyDeleteYour a winner